My second sig : )

Gifted Designs · June 22nd, 2008, 10:01 PM

Here is my second sig : )
I did this only a few hours after my first : )
So it was done within the first day or so i had photoshop : )
Its been such a huge gap between uploading the two due to the exams ive had at school : / REVISION REVISION REVISION : /
Anyways , enough excuses here it is : )

Feedback ? : )

.Idiom · June 22nd, 2008, 10:23 PM

Ok there's a few areas in this piece that need some work...

1) the render takes up A LOT of the canvas, not bad but it's not your work remember you want to show your skill in your pieces of work.

2) work on your colors the top left is wayyyyyy to over contrasted

3) the c4d behind him doesn't blend very well with him and sticks out

*I know it's only your second piece but I think with the correct CnC you could improve DRASTICALLY in your third piece* try reading some tutorials and see where it takes you

!#[A]narchy · June 23rd, 2008, 12:00 PM

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Ok there's a few areas in this piece that need some work...

1) the render takes up A LOT of the canvas, not bad but it's not your work remember you want to show your skill in your pieces of work.

2) work on your colors the top left is wayyyyyy to over contrasted

3) the c4d behind him doesn't blend very well with him and sticks out

*I know it's only your second piece but I think with the correct CnC you could improve DRASTICALLY in your third piece* try reading some tutorials and see where it takes you

I agree, the text needs to be part of the focal as well and not draw attention away from it. Try to move your text closer to the focal and tie it in. Good luck and kiu

codyman1362 · June 24th, 2008, 12:29 PM

heres my second sig

Gifted Designs · June 24th, 2008, 06:09 PM

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Originally Posted by codyman1362

heres my second sig

So

To be quite honest , i am not pleased with this : (
My first one was better and thats not THAT good : )
But some other pieces ive done im pretty pleased with : )

DyingDreamer · June 24th, 2008, 07:12 PM

Please post this in showcase exposure. Since you can just ask for C&C there.

thethe · June 30th, 2008, 10:07 PM

Its big and render takes up too much room, and only a c4d. It's not the best.

DyingDreamer · June 30th, 2008, 10:21 PM

And no need to say whos is better. They are both decent for a second sig.

bonethugs4eva3 · July 8th, 2008, 12:31 PM

sry i just got photoshop myself and i am really bad at it so i cant give u advice but you're 2 graphics look a million time better than anything that i have done, i dont know how u were that good with your first ones but good luck man hey look pretty good to me, lol

Gifted Designs · July 8th, 2008, 08:01 PM

Thanks for the comment : )
I dont no what happened with this sig : (
My first one was far better , than this one : )
And dont put yourself down : )
Ive seen your second sig , its not that bad for a second sig : D
Also i thought id tell you ive posted in your thred in showcase exposure , hopefully it helps : )

June 22nd, 2008, 10:01 PM	#1
Gifted Designs Up Coming Artist Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: England , United kingdom Posts: 152 My Mood: Thanks: 3 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	My second sig : ) Here is my second sig : ) I did this only a few hours after my first : ) So it was done within the first day or so i had photoshop : ) Its been such a huge gap between uploading the two due to the exams ive had at school : / REVISION REVISION REVISION : / Anyways , enough excuses here it is : ) Feedback ? : )

June 22nd, 2008, 10:23 PM	#2
.Idiom Ich Bin Ein Berliner GFX Skill: Intermediate Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: North Carolina Posts: 1,920 My Mood: Thanks: 11 Thanked 36 Times in 35 Posts	Ok there's a few areas in this piece that need some work... 1) the render takes up A LOT of the canvas, not bad but it's not your work remember you want to show your skill in your pieces of work. 2) work on your colors the top left is wayyyyyy to over contrasted 3) the c4d behind him doesn't blend very well with him and sticks out I know it's only your second piece but I think with the correct CnC you could improve DRASTICALLY in your third piece try reading some tutorials and see where it takes you __________________ Constructive feedback focuses on improvement, not personal criticism

June 24th, 2008, 07:12 PM	#6
DyingDreamer Dead girls don't cry. GFX Skill: Novice Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Among the devoured. Posts: 1,274 My Mood: Thanks: 7 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts	Please post this in showcase exposure. Since you can just ask for C&C there. __________________ Gifts:[x][x][x][x] We will be buried at the ocean floor, I've come to far to live a pointless life, We wonder upon these halls, This is the art of the dismemberment.

June 30th, 2008, 10:21 PM	#8
DyingDreamer Dead girls don't cry. GFX Skill: Novice Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Among the devoured. Posts: 1,274 My Mood: Thanks: 7 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts	And no need to say whos is better. They are both decent for a second sig. __________________ Gifts:[x][x][x][x] We will be buried at the ocean floor, I've come to far to live a pointless life, We wonder upon these halls, This is the art of the dismemberment.

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June 24th, 2008, 12:29 PM	#4
codyman1362 Lurker Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	heres my second sig

June 30th, 2008, 10:07 PM	#7
thethe Lurker Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Its big and render takes up too much room, and only a c4d. It's not the best.

July 8th, 2008, 12:31 PM	#9
bonethugs4eva3 Lurker Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 15 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	sry i just got photoshop myself and i am really bad at it so i cant give u advice but you're 2 graphics look a million time better than anything that i have done, i dont know how u were that good with your first ones but good luck man hey look pretty good to me, lol

July 8th, 2008, 08:01 PM	#10
Gifted Designs Up Coming Artist Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: England , United kingdom Posts: 152 My Mood: Thanks: 3 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Thanks for the comment : ) I dont no what happened with this sig : ( My first one was far better , than this one : ) And dont put yourself down : ) Ive seen your second sig , its not that bad for a second sig : D Also i thought id tell you ive posted in your thred in showcase exposure , hopefully it helps : )

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