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Taurox · July 12th, 2008, 09:21 PM

thats what im working on i think its way to strong but i dont wanna screw it up any ideas on what i should do from here and what should i do for the text?

Axeguard · July 12th, 2008, 11:34 PM

Well I'm not really adept at that kind of signature, but how about increasing the contrast (Err - The color's concentration if you know what I mean) on the right side?

Aegis · July 13th, 2008, 01:42 AM

Bring out your focal point before you do anything.

Taurox · July 13th, 2008, 01:43 AM

kk ill give that a try and post update

TheProphet92 · July 13th, 2008, 03:37 AM

At first I didn't even see the face. To me it just looked like a background at first glance.

Taurox · July 13th, 2008, 04:59 AM

i know ive been tryin somethings but i like how well blended it is i dono what to do what if i added a darker area around face and then got rid of the shiny peice beside face would that work?

Sean · July 13th, 2008, 02:11 PM

The colours looks kinda messed and you cant really get a good look at your focal.

Axeguard · July 13th, 2008, 11:57 PM

Imo, right now your sig just depends on taste. I think it looks fine as-is, but that's me.

Gl!

Hanabi · July 14th, 2008, 12:14 AM

Colors are a monotone, and the focal should be more defined.

lacrossman930 · July 18th, 2008, 10:08 PM

I'd say you could add a light source(or a better one)... and maybe a light filter to kinda make peoples eyes move towars your focal.. oh and do a clipping mask those always look nice

July 12th, 2008, 09:21 PM	#1
Taurox Lurker Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 18 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Work In Progress thats what im working on i think its way to strong but i dont wanna screw it up any ideas on what i should do from here and what should i do for the text? __________________

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Aegis GSA Official Shark GSA Staff: Battle Crew GFX Skill: Intermediate Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: GIMP Posts: 803 My Mood: Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Bring out your focal point before you do anything. __________________ Gifts ! [Vo1ture] [Hubdehub] [INXS] [Wandy] [Fir3n] [Kaze]

July 13th, 2008, 01:43 AM	#4
Taurox Lurker Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 18 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	kk ill give that a try and post update __________________

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Taurox Lurker Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 18 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i know ive been tryin somethings but i like how well blended it is i dono what to do what if i added a darker area around face and then got rid of the shiny peice beside face would that work? __________________

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July 12th, 2008, 11:34 PM	#2
Axeguard Lurker Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 41 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Well I'm not really adept at that kind of signature, but how about increasing the contrast (Err - The color's concentration if you know what I mean) on the right side?

July 13th, 2008, 03:37 AM	#5
TheProphet92 Lurker Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 8 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	At first I didn't even see the face. To me it just looked like a background at first glance.

July 13th, 2008, 02:11 PM	#7
Sean Lurker Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The colours looks kinda messed and you cant really get a good look at your focal.

July 13th, 2008, 11:57 PM	#8
Axeguard Lurker Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 41 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Imo, right now your sig just depends on taste. I think it looks fine as-is, but that's me. Gl!

July 14th, 2008, 12:14 AM	#9
Hanabi Lurker Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 11 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Colors are a monotone, and the focal should be more defined.

July 18th, 2008, 10:08 PM	#10
lacrossman930 Lurker Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: wouldnt you like to know Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'd say you could add a light source(or a better one)... and maybe a light filter to kinda make peoples eyes move towars your focal.. oh and do a clipping mask those always look nice

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